2009年11月16日月曜日

Kento Nakashima
Class 4
Novenber 16

My perfect partner
I want to describe a my perfect partner. The first her character is very gentle. When I am in trouble, she always helps me. When I am hard, she always encourages me. She leads me to the right direction. The second her character is strong willed. She is the person whom she never compromises with. She carry it through that she is right, if the person of the circumference say wrong. She can recognize another people. The third her character is obedient. She laughs well, cries well, and be angry well. She believes a person. She express feelings very wealthly. In short, I respect her very much. I want to become a human being like her. I can meet a perfect partner like her and feel that I am realy happy.

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  1. "When I am hard" this is not used correctly. I think you mean, when I am down or depressed... Very good. 9/10

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